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 scrutiny and she was unable to attain gainful employment in her field. She registered her unemployment with
 the university system and was promptly picked up by draft for the Sfaalic Expeditionary Service, working as a
-scout and salvager to assist in an ongoing war effort. Metri's resentment toward [name of Hannah's character]
+scout and salvager to assist Sfaalic Imperial forces in the [[ak_ana#annexation_and_the_red_feather_war |
-grew even deeper.
+Red Feather War]]. Metri's resentment toward [name of Hannah's character] grew even deeper.
-[Section briefly describing the war and its combatants; would be useful to link to an article about the war.]
 Near the end of Metri's term of service, her salvage group was dispatched to search for abandoned weapons
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 Still in debt and even farther from her desired career, Metri's resentment of
-[name of Hannah's character] – who seemed to be making a name for himself in regional politics – dissolved
+[name of Hannah's character] – who seemed to be making a name for himself in Sfaalic Imperial
-into resignation. She sought and found employment with Anjen Mercantile and worked on the merchant marine
+politics – dissolved into resignation. She sought and found employment with Anjen Mercantile and worked on the
-vessel ''MV Sure to Follow'' for several years, eventually accruing enough money to pay off her medical debt
+merchant marine vessel //MV Sure to Follow// for several years, eventually accruing enough money to pay off her
-and still have a modest savings afterward.
+medical debt and still have a modest savings afterward.
 In this time of relative quietude, Metri came to follow the journalism and advocacy of

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